Academic Writing

Error Detection Exercise(1)

Read the following sentences and detect any kinds of error(s), if any.

1. All tries and researches for finding a drug or vaccine for AIDS expose to failure.

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2. This virus killed the T cell that are the most important cells of immune system.

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3. AIDS has three period.

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4. The first is window period that last 6 mounts.

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5. In this period, the disease don’t detected with blood test.

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6. In this period the immune system fight with virus.

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7. At the end of this period people may shows some symptoms such as anemia and lymphnodenopathy.

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8. The third phase is the symptomatic disease that called AIDS.

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9. The patient shows the symptoms of AIDS such as various cancers and infectious disease.

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10. There are some ways for transmission of it.

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11. The first way is sexual transmission that is the most common ways of transmission of AIDS.

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12. Another way is transmission from mother to newborn.

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13. The next way is the use of common device between drug addicted.

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14. Africa has the most numbers of patients in the world.

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15. There are many characteristics for a good doctor,for example, have many informations.

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16. Next,power of identifying and communicate between his obtained and science of medicine.

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17. Good doctor have marked effect in society.

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18. When there are good doctor in society, count of disease is decrease in society and country.

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19. When a doctor is a good doctor , people respect to him.

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20. There is many difference between Iranian doctor and forign doctor.

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21. whrease Iranian doctor attempt to car patient , forign doctor don’t attempt to car Iranian patient.

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22. unlike forign doctor who ar in high class , forign doctor in it’s society are in middle class.

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23. unlike forign doctor who have many modern instrument and tool for car of the patients, Iranian doctor have not many modern instrument and tool for car of the patients.

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24. when a door is a good doctor that have many charactristics and instrument.

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25. For example a doctor must be have enough information about disease.

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26. He should was been a intelligent and struggler student in period of his studying.

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27. Second , he should be familer to new knowledges of medicine.

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28. He should study more and more magazines that include of new news of medicin.

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29. The factor for a good doctor is ability of well diagnosis.

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30. He should can match his mental information with his ability in diagnosis of diseas.

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31. The next factor is to be connected with sick.

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32. He should have a good behaiviour in contact with sick.

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33. The last and the most specification of a good doctor is moral sense.

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34. The good doctor must have modern hospital.

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35.First, their sould study very hard at university.

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35. Second , their should research many case that related to this field.

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36. As a result , their search them on the computer or in many scientific site , or study very magazine.

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37. Their must be careful and consider that time is very important for them.

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38. Finally , when this period of time is finished, now their tells a good doctor.

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39. To me , a good doctor must be 3 factors.

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40. Finally-most importanty-they don’t work for money because they must work for servicing the patient and loveing to their duty.

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